dblitz » July 4th, 2017, 4:35 am wrote:I will try to think up a story with a plot based on media fakery.
I'd love to read that - sincerely enjoy your writing style!

dblitz » July 4th, 2017, 4:35 am wrote:I will try to think up a story with a plot based on media fakery.
dblitz » 03 Jul 2017, 21:04 wrote:I just found this old story I wrote, around 2005 or 6. It has some space elements that some may disagree with, and maybe I would write it differently now, but the plot is the main thing. I would appreciate feedback as I am getting back into writing and I might even re-write this since it was a while ago now and I have an alternative ending in mind.
https://dblitzblog.blogspot.com.au/2017/07/elegant-solution.html
dblitz » July 3rd, 2017, 4:04 pm wrote:I just found this old story I wrote, around 2005 or 6. It has some space elements that some may disagree with, and maybe I would write it differently now, but the plot is the main thing. I would appreciate feedback as I am getting back into writing and I might even re-write this since it was a while ago now and I have an alternative ending in mind.
Kassie wrote:Dark Energy
pained him. He knew æther when he saw it,
watched theory take a cure-all
to smooth out the night, patching
up physics by tradition and verse, familiar
hearthside legends, while he ran
with the toothed unknown,
the untamed science replete
with attributes more rich unnamed,
more honest, in a time when honest work was rare.
But æther came at dusk, swinging
its toolbox, whistling worksong.
Old jack-of-all-trades:
rough-handed, stead-sure, employed
to do what a certified labourer couldn't –
to push planets around the sun, carry
light across the cosmos, or make
the Universe expand;
in other words, he'd concede,
a man in need of home, love, supper,
and life apart from anonymity.
hoi.polloi » April 13th, 2018, 1:07 am wrote:That's a pretty good mashup! Hysterical!
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